Intro: Each week in our class we are asked to write a short piece about our weekend. In it we are working on editing skills and third person writing.
What I did on the weekend!
On the weekend my friend Niamh came over and we did heaps of fun stuff. First we did some dances and then after that we went to the shop and got some snacks. When we got home from the shop we played some games on the ps4. After the games mum had to do something in town so we went with her and did some more dances in public. Then we went home and chilled for a bit. After we chilled we went for a walk to see my mum at my sister's friends mum's house. Then we started to walk back home. When we got home a couple minutes later mum got home and it was about night time. So me and Niamh got ready for bed. Well we didn’t really go to bed. We went to sleep at 1:37 really late!
Reflection: I learned that I have to put a space after and before a full stop!
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